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Re: (craigslist) posting in automotive services
Misspelled words with corrections are in red. Yes, I am a English/Grammar nerd. Don't hate, appreciate!
I have been reading these postings for years, and every time I find one from some back yard mechanic, (sentence fragment) it makes me ill that you people people like you write adds ads
to get business. You cant can't or can noteven write an ad with good good works, but proper would be more correct in this context grammer.
What offends me more is your you are or you'retaking money away from my business potential and cause a lot of troubles for people when you work on cars.
You toss out a list of prices to suck these people into your garage game.
I read your ad and you cant can't do half the repairs you claim. It was obvious when you ask asked them to tell you what is wrong, that you dont didn't know what your you were doing.
I dont don't or do notknow who you are , or what your you're or you areabout. But I have a printed out copy of your listing and I am going to fax it too to the state attorney generals office, along with the state tax office. Lets Let'ssee what they have to say about advertising when your you're or you arenot a registered business.
You should either quit posting here ,or get a license to operate a business.
I bet your you are or you'renot even insured? This statement makes no sense, it should be a statement, not a question What are you going to do when you mistakenly mess up some Hondas Honda's or Hondas' timing and you wreck an engine? Put yourself in that customers customer'splace and think about what replace what with howthey would feel likeremove like.
Do you have any technical support to support your services? I bet you dont don't.
i have a obd1 and 2 reader and a $ 700.00 in tools if i dont have the tool i can borrow it from my friends dad or some one elce
ill post my add up tomorrow (all im saying is what the hell )
Now you can point out his "good" grammar to him. That is all.
- Stephen
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