I'm calling bullshit on this being all freestyle. In both links, it sounds like you ran out of a beat to finish a line, and just continued the next one reading it off a piece of paper. Plus, it sounds like you are reading.
I will applaud you for recording this and sharing it with people. That takes some balls. But I will say that there is no way this is freestyle. If you wrote it or thought about any of the lines previous to recording them, its not freestyle.
Get yourself a good mic, record when no one is around, and I want to hear what you have.
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